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OC
11-20-2001, 09:36 PM
Enough


I give all and no one sees

My heart screams and wails and shatters
but I do not flinch

I must be strong after all
for that is my role in life

But another role I do not have

Brother sometimes
Uncle occasionally

Son, certainly

When does my life become my own?

leemaj
11-20-2001, 10:26 PM
that is pretty good, my friend...hmm..we should have a poetry thread.

Pinkgirl36
11-20-2001, 10:56 PM
:D very very good. I know how you feel with that one, except for the whole brother,uncle,son thing, maybe sister,aunt,daughter. :D

BrewMaster
11-20-2001, 11:47 PM
Good stuff OC. thanks for sharing with us.