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tweeteresa
03-15-2004, 03:14 AM
*edit* i wrote a lil more

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it breaks my heart to hear u say
all the things u say, about her that way.
but who am i, right?
just someone to talk to late at night.
an ear i lend
your heart, to mend...

invisible but just a voice u hear
as i listen of all your troubles and fears
thinking, missing, wanting her still
that void in your heart to be filled.
am i naive or just too nice?
seems like it's me that always sacrifice...

i said i just wanted to simply live
but that means taking, not just give.
the 2 way street became a dead end
i was wrong, there is no curve or bend
so here i am, still....me.
and there you are....still too blind to see...

when you cry i feel your pain
when the world is all wrong i struggled in vain
just to see u laugh or smile
just to make it worth your while
yet inside i'm hurting still
that side you'll never see or feel...

i want to be the one you think of
not her, not your past, not your ex-love
i want to be the one who fill your thoughts
the one you ran after, the one you sought
yet her image still haunts your mind
your heart still heavy, in a bind...

but i'm still invisible, still faded
you, lost in thoughts, still jaded
me, lost in feelings, still trying
you, searching for answers, still finding
and yet, here i am.....in front of you
and there you are.....still not knowing what to do...

- teresa

eSDee
03-15-2004, 10:02 AM
Thats beautiful.

ShawnLee
03-15-2004, 11:36 PM
I'm not playing for points here. That was good. THat or I'm just braindead from writing my paper.

oblongmelon
03-16-2004, 04:49 AM
I think someone has a crush on an "online" buddy- ;)

TofuNinja
03-16-2004, 08:43 AM
I am feeling this poem from both sides. THe person waiting and hurt and the person hurting and blind.... unless I am just feeling this poem wrong :(

Jenny
03-16-2004, 08:48 AM
:( That was beautiful.

attgig
03-16-2004, 09:18 AM
how frustrating. :(

Karen
03-16-2004, 12:01 PM
nice :(

RoniMan
03-16-2004, 12:06 PM
you know what'll cheer you up tweet?

coming the the G|A gathering!!!!!

:thumbup:

ShawnLee
03-16-2004, 02:59 PM
Originally posted by RoniMan
you know what'll cheer you up tweet?
coming the the G|A gathering!!!!!
:thumbup:

COUGH! stalker COUGH!

ahem.

DaFunkyUnit
03-16-2004, 03:56 PM
Originally posted by oblongmelon
I think someone has a crush on an "online" buddy- ;)

so who is this "online" buddy? is it a G|A'er?

the people want to know! :D

tupacboy
03-16-2004, 04:10 PM
nice..

TofuNinja
03-16-2004, 05:53 PM
Most likely not a Got Apexer, because from what I have seen in my lurking years is that if any guy here had a chick like Tweeteresa wanting them they would not ignore her. ALl the guys here, who are not taken, would hook up with her in a heart beat.

Nice edit, doesn't change the feel of the poem. You go girl, his loss.

kimchicowboy
03-16-2004, 07:41 PM
Originally posted by ShawnLee105


COUGH! stalker COUGH!

ahem.
does revil have competition? hee hee. :P

tweeteresa
03-16-2004, 08:03 PM
thanks everyone. i think obby is talking about one of the guys, for those that are confused.

roniman...can't make it to the gathering bcuz i have finals. one this friday, one monday and one tuesday as well.

revil
03-16-2004, 08:23 PM
Originally posted by kimchicowboy

does revil have competition? hee hee. :P
WHAT?! who do i have to kill?!

kimchicowboy
03-16-2004, 08:50 PM
Originally posted by tweeteresa
thanks everyone. i think obby is talking about one of the guys, for those that are confused.

roniman...can't make it to the gathering bcuz i have finals. one this friday, one monday and one tuesday as well.
bah to finals. let's just say that it's a foretaste of what spring quarter's gonna be like anyhow. *sigh* spring quarter. well, at least for me, spring quarter was all fun. :D

RoniMan
03-17-2004, 11:17 PM
Originally posted by revil

WHAT?! who do i have to kill?!
ummm....tofuninja...yeah, kill him!

:P

TofuNinja
03-18-2004, 09:08 AM
who? what what? Why is Revil killing me?.... or why is Revil going to attempt to kill me?

The Happy Squirrel
03-19-2004, 10:08 PM
awesome awesome awesome
tahts all i can say bout that