03-15-2004, 04:14 AM
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late night poem...
*edit* i wrote a lil more
<untitled> it breaks my heart to hear u say all the things u say, about her that way. but who am i, right? just someone to talk to late at night. an ear i lend your heart, to mend... invisible but just a voice u hear as i listen of all your troubles and fears thinking, missing, wanting her still that void in your heart to be filled. am i naive or just too nice? seems like it's me that always sacrifice... i said i just wanted to simply live but that means taking, not just give. the 2 way street became a dead end i was wrong, there is no curve or bend so here i am, still....me. and there you are....still too blind to see... when you cry i feel your pain when the world is all wrong i struggled in vain just to see u laugh or smile just to make it worth your while yet inside i'm hurting still that side you'll never see or feel... i want to be the one you think of not her, not your past, not your ex-love i want to be the one who fill your thoughts the one you ran after, the one you sought yet her image still haunts your mind your heart still heavy, in a bind... but i'm still invisible, still faded you, lost in thoughts, still jaded me, lost in feelings, still trying you, searching for answers, still finding and yet, here i am.....in front of you and there you are.....still not knowing what to do... - teresa Last edited by tweeteresa : 03-16-2004 at 06:03 AM. |
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03-15-2004, 11:02 AM
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Thats beautiful.
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03-16-2004, 12:36 AM
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I'm not playing for points here. That was good. THat or I'm just braindead from writing my paper.
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03-16-2004, 05:49 AM
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I think someone has a crush on an "online" buddy-
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03-16-2004, 09:43 AM
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I am feeling this poem from both sides. THe person waiting and hurt and the person hurting and blind.... unless I am just feeling this poem wrong
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03-16-2004, 09:48 AM
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That was beautiful.
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03-16-2004, 10:18 AM
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how frustrating.
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03-16-2004, 01:01 PM
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nice
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03-16-2004, 01:06 PM
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you know what'll cheer you up tweet?
coming the the G|A gathering!!!!!  |
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03-16-2004, 03:59 PM
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COUGH! stalker COUGH! ahem. |
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03-16-2004, 04:56 PM
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so who is this "online" buddy? is it a G|A'er? the people want to know! 
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03-16-2004, 05:10 PM
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nice..
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03-16-2004, 06:53 PM
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Most likely not a Got Apexer, because from what I have seen in my lurking years is that if any guy here had a chick like Tweeteresa wanting them they would not ignore her. ALl the guys here, who are not taken, would hook up with her in a heart beat.
Nice edit, doesn't change the feel of the poem. You go girl, his loss. |
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03-16-2004, 08:41 PM
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03-16-2004, 09:03 PM
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thanks everyone. i think obby is talking about one of the guys, for those that are confused.
roniman...can't make it to the gathering bcuz i have finals. one this friday, one monday and one tuesday as well. |
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03-16-2004, 09:23 PM
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03-16-2004, 09:50 PM
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03-18-2004, 12:17 AM
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03-18-2004, 10:08 AM
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who? what what? Why is Revil killing me?.... or why is Revil going to attempt to kill me?
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03-19-2004, 11:08 PM
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awesome awesome awesome
tahts all i can say bout that
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